New work by Rishi Kapil : Unwinding , 44 x33 in , oil on canvas

rishikapil

Dear Mark Sir ,
This is my new work would love to have your valued comments.........

maugie

wow you are so great. so brave. so wonderfull @-)

Gary

=D>

bhopali

The details are not painstaking , but awesome !

SusieQ

Beautiful. There is something about the left eye that catches my attention but not sure what it is. Maynr its just tht it has

Savannah

A beautiful painting...thanks for sharing it with us!

I would however, darken the right side of the face...the light source coming from the left but the values seem to be the same ....this would create a better effect and I think correct the problem with the left eye..

But whatever you decide to do...this is a great piece of work and hopefully you will continue to show your beautiful work here and try Mark's approach at painting...

Mark_Carder

Wonderful, love the mood of this one, and the mutated colors!!! Great!!!

tjs

I truly love this painting. One of the best faces I've seen painted! It's outstanding! ^:)^

Cin_D

Wow! =D>

Karen

Very nice. My only comment is about the stripes. The top is "graphic" (read strong black and white) and when I block that area, greater focus is drawn to her eyes. (for me)

Try it. Close one eye and mask just the stripes with a crooked finger or piece of dark matte paper. Now unfocus your open eye and look at the whole image. Take the mask away, put it back. Do that a few times and see if you notice a difference in any part of the painting.

I really like how light and airy the space is. I love how the items on the wall stubbornly refuse to line up, lending it that very casual feeling.

rishikapil

Thanx Mark Sir for kind words and appreciation .....I am just amazed with yor work and have become a huge fan of your ways of working . So organized , systematic , in order great approach . I am already organizing my bottles now to mix paint ur way . Thx for all ur help .I have learnt a lot .

rishikapil

Thanx friends for ur appreciation and suggestions .Savannah , Karen I appreciate ur observations . TJS u made my day.

Jonny

She has a great expression, love it!

Graciella

Really lovely! =D> I think you did very nice work

sue_deutscher

awesome!

rishikapil

Thx Jonny , Graciella , Sue.........

Ronna

Oh wow, it's really nice. Well done.

opnwyder

I especially like the representation of her hand and her fingernails. Really nice effort. I agree with Karen about the stripes. If you tone them down a bit (reduce the contrast and the hardness of the lines), I think it improves the painting.

Gary

Interesting how we all see things a bit differently. I don't notice 'the stripes' at all. I go straight to her hand and face. From my standpoint, I really like it the way it is including the background.

rishikapil

Gary , I painted what I saw it , you are right, its really interesting how we all see it differently. I like to paint what I see the shapes the values and then the colours ...is what I follow....but its nice to get new viewpoints from friends

Harrell

I don't know how I missed this - it's beautiful!

myc

Fantastic work rishikapil! =D>

LizONeal

I am thinking it made it in the DMP gallery so fast that you have your answer on what Mark thinks of it! Wonderful!

edward

I love this just the way it is. You are very talented, Rishi.

Pop

This is so good, it has emotion, the eyes are painted beautifully, as is everything in it Wow!

garrykravit

A beautiful painting! Great job.

Paanini

What can I say.... ^:)^

rishikapil

Thx Mark Sir .....feels on top to feature in the DMP Gallery........thx for all ur kind words friends......

Ron

Well done! Well constructed hand!

DavidUK

Beautiful

garrykravit

Wow, really nicely done. I love this

marieb

Beautiful delicate hand and nails ..

anthonyleon

Very good work.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.