still life with flowers and wine glasses

RUESGA · May 13

hello! I hope you all had a great week, this is a small still life I completed this week hope you like it, please feel free to comment

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tassieguy · May 13

Really nice.

Richard_P · May 13

Really good, especially the flowers!

GTO · May 13

Classy. I like the paired wine glasses. And the little bell. If I were to quibble about any of it (which I am about to do. 😂). There are two flowers that don’t feel right. The one flower that is the lowest on the right looks flat or something and the highlight seems too bright.

The flower on the far left seems to distract me. When I cover it up the painting feels right. Should it be darker? Should it be smaller? Should you replace it with just some flower petals? I know you need something there to balance the composition.
All the other flowers look perfect.

allforChrist · May 15

Excellent painting, I always really enjoy seeing your work.

I think lightening the far left flower as @GTO suggested would be the thing to do. The lamp is pretty dark on the left side, so it would realistically make sense to darken up that flower. And you'd keep the Golden Spiral better that way.

vartikasinha · May 15

@RUESGA wow superb

kaustavM · May 15

@RUESGA this is awesome! Did you use the full DMP method in this?

RUESGA · May 16

Hi thanks for your comments and suggestions they are very much appreciated 😃 @kaustavM I try to follow DMP but I’m not as organized 😄

Abstraction · May 16

This is great. I love the play of yellows and subtle pink against dark. The ribbon is a lovely touch. The perspective is a counter-intuitive angle that swirls your vision around a curve. And the two full glasses accentuate a sense of depth and are beautifully portrayed.

oilpainter1950 · May 17

Beautiful.

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