Followed some good advice from y’all and set it aside for a while. As you can see I changed it up quite a bit. It looks a little unfinished but thinking about stopping here. I’d just like to hear what others think. Should I articulate some more areas? Leave it as is? Change something?
I was working this one and just decided maybe I should stop here and leave it more abstract. I would appreciate any comments pos or neg. Thanks for taking the time.
After posting, as usual I see some things I need to touch up. But let me know if you think something (or the whole thing) doesn’t work. Thanks again.